Laurie Ginn Poet Senryu

The Peace Maker

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                                                         Oh restless spirit
                                                               
                                       
                                              Seek the one that calms the storm


                                                      And in Him find peace

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October 25, 2009 at 1:55 PM Amen! So much truth shared in just three lines. Thank you for sharing this message with us. Blessings to you. Karen

Lena Pate May 12, 2009 at 4:34 PM Nicely written

Crystal Turner May 12, 2009 at 10:08 AM in the poem are you talking about god? its short but very powerful. I like it. You did a splendid job on it. Keep up the awesome work.

Shirin Neshat May 8, 2009 at 6:45 PM nice.

Keith Bickerstaffe May 7, 2009 at 12:18 AM mail call!!

Brian Strand May 5, 2009 at 10:44 AM Amen Amen let it be Laurie.Rgds Brian

John Rhinem May 5, 2009 at 5:25 AM Smile~The answer to the bittersweet write which I just read!!!:):)~But not just for one, but all I somehow hope~whether "God" be within, whatever form one chooses to see Him~Smile~As long as its truly "Him!!!?":):)~"Excellent Write of Hope Dear Laurie Ginn~'Perfect!!!'":):)~Smile, I believe "You" have one more....

Hgarvey Daniel Esquire May 4, 2009 at 9:19 PM Dear Laurie, LOVE this great Write ALWAYS YOURS...HG Soup mail call

Hgarvey Daniel Esquire May 4, 2009 at 8:41 PM Dear Laurie, A very faith inspiring Write YOUR POETIC Religious Talent Shines with the Truth in this amazing Haiku superb LOVE YOU ALWAYS...HG

James Marshall Goff May 4, 2009 at 7:59 PM Oh Laurie, storms there are many, Lass. Your true haiku almost makes me cry. You are a treasure. And most gracious thanks for your continued support! Love, Jim

Debbie Guzzi May 4, 2009 at 2:20 PM Did you know a "gun" was called a peacemaker? men... Light & Love

Nadia Shahwan May 4, 2009 at 9:58 AM Thrilling and fascinating.

L'Nass Shango May 4, 2009 at 6:35 AM Restless and peace are so antithetical ... it brings resolution out of this concise span of words ... gathering all meaning to a singularity of moment. Awesome.

Keith Bickerstaffe May 4, 2009 at 5:35 AM You got mail! K.

Keith Bickerstaffe May 4, 2009 at 5:17 AM Good morning sweetheart! Such a lovely SENRYU, with beautiful flow and excellent word selections... Best wishes, Keith

David Smalling May 4, 2009 at 4:53 AM ... and also peace me in ... I could sit by your poem like water and stare into its peace, love

Brian Strand May 4, 2009 at 2:05 AM So true Laurie.Rgds Brian & thanks for your kind words & comments

Ronald Bingham May 3, 2009 at 9:16 PM Absolutely, a very true and profound statement. Thank you so much for all your kind words and enduring support. God Bless you my friend. Ron

Sharon Winter May 3, 2009 at 12:25 PM Oh thank you for this inspiring message. Trying to make my way back here. A joy to read Ms. Laurie. I thank you once again for writing. Love, Shar

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen May 3, 2009 at 11:00 AM Great advice. It is well spoken in this haiku. Keep writing. Love, Dane

May 3, 2009 at 10:29 AM Amen! What a wonderful message in just three lines. Blessings to you for sharing your inspirational words with us. Karen

Raul Moreno May 3, 2009 at 9:47 AM Wonderful haiku, loved the message...Raul

Kristin Reynolds May 3, 2009 at 9:36 AM Amazing haiku, beautiful and calming. good advice for anyone. love, Kristin

Carolyn Devonshire May 3, 2009 at 9:07 AM Surely we see God's work when we "find peace." Great work, Laurie!

Diane Christian May 3, 2009 at 8:40 AM Amen my friend a short poem full of peace and truth , one of my fave scriptures is be still and know that i am God, anyway God bless you from diane

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