The Patron Saint of Worthless Causes

Paint me Saintly, my actions lately Have shown such cause a'plenty My Quarters stately, my Morals greatly Unfazed by thoughts of many Still in search of the Peace I've wanted- Looking, tracking; intent to find! But by my former self I am haunted, Lurking not more than two feet behind...

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Danesh Morgan

Date: 8/29/2013 8:38:00 AM

deep frying piece more to come like the sounds it makes in the end

Just That Archaic Poet
Date: 8/29/2013 9:02:00 AM

I admit I'm not sure what that means, Danesh, but I hope it's positive lol But thanks for dropping by, nonetheless :)

Karen Anglesey

Date: 8/26/2013 6:45:00 AM

You are a brilliant work of art. Last 2 lines nailed it. Wonderful work

Just That Archaic Poet
Date: 8/26/2013 11:24:00 AM

Karen, you have yet to not put a smile on my face with every comment you leave. As always, I appreciate it so much :)

Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/26/2013 5:32:00 AM

Enjoyed reading your creative work this morn..I haven't reached that Saintly or Morals greatly or my Quarters stately being yet..Sara

Just That Archaic Poet
Date: 8/26/2013 11:21:00 AM

Thank you for the read and reply, Sara. Don't worry; I don't think many of us have hit that state yet today. One day maybe lol Thanks for visiting! :)