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From root to crown, in soma nectar drown ~ So spake the sage of renown Know this dear soul: as above, so below Meld with the heart in silence Where God Himself awaits In childlike trust, tip-toe within Love in love with love, has no fear The door is open, just walk in Joy’s unending, as bliss throbs spear nothing need be done just let go of, to get to ~ for we’re living light 20-April-2022 HMS, Rhymezone A combination of forms Poetry Contest Sponsor: Emile Pinet Crystalline (17 syllables couplet) + Kimo (10-7-6) + octosyllable quatrain + haiku (5-7-5)

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Date: 4/20/2022 1:36:00 AM
Your mixture of forms are a delight to read. A lively poem. Best for a win.
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Date: 4/20/2022 1:58:00 AM
Ah, the form combination is a contest requirement.
Date: 4/19/2022 10:20:00 PM
Wow, so profound, and the message towards the light, yes indeed one to follow.
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Date: 4/19/2022 10:34:00 PM
Thank you, hh!

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