The Path of Friendship

You have shared My joy and pain laughterand tears bringing me firendship throughout the months and years.You have made me feel Emotions so newand,I may be hesitant,But my love for you is ture. You have opened my eyes to a whole newlight showing me the beauty around while holding me tight. You have allowed me to remember times I've long forgotten.Holding my hand on a path I have chosen,And on this journey I takeá to a time unknown.Blinded by love not knowing where I've been or where I'm going.I at least know we will be friends.A smile comes across my face because it's a thought I can cherish forever
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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March 21, 2012 at 3:50 PM
Nice sentimental value to this.- Friendly advice only- I noticed in a couple of areas, there are words too close together, where there should be a space. - laughter and - new and - new light - take Ai (I don't know how to that wave "thingamajig"(LOL) on the top of the A. Other than that, I really enjoyed this alot. You're very talented. Please come and read my poetry. Thanks for sharing.
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