The Path I Took

You took the short path,
in life many do.
I took the long path,
for the lovely view.
Blue shiny water,
I wanted to see.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Labyrinth Avatar
August 26, 2023 at 4:34 PM
Profound. :)
Goldsmith Avatar
September 4, 2023 at 10:54 PM
Thanks for your note. Glad you enjoyed my Path write. Your one word "Profound" was powerful to me. Hugs... Have a great/fun day writing away................
Kendrick Avatar
August 21, 2023 at 2:47 PM
Glad that you took the long path and it lead you this way. Thanks for sharing and for visiting my page with congratulations. Sara
Goldsmith Avatar
August 22, 2023 at 12:18 PM
Thanks for your note. Glad you like my Path write. Have a great/fun day writing away................
Andresen Avatar
August 17, 2023 at 11:53 AM
- A good choice, Paula ... lovely written :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs
Goldsmith Avatar
August 21, 2023 at 12:11 PM
Thanks for your note and for your best wishes. Glad you enjoyed this write. Hug... Have a great/fun day writing away................
Sands Avatar
August 17, 2023 at 10:12 AM
Excellent poem. Filled with gratitude for the views on the longer path. I love this. It will be a Fave too :)
Goldsmith Avatar
August 17, 2023 at 11:13 AM
WOW!!! Thanks for your note and very kind words/fav. You just made my day. Glad you love my write. Again Thanks...  Have a great/fun day writing away................
Daniel Avatar
August 16, 2023 at 8:02 PM
Great work, Paula:)
Goldsmith Avatar
August 17, 2023 at 8:33 AM
Thanks for your note. Glad you found this to be Great work. Thanks... You made my day with your kind words. Have a great/fun day writing away................
McBride  Avatar
August 15, 2023 at 4:32 PM
Love it, blessings to you on your long walk enjoying the beauty of God's work at hand : )
Goldsmith Avatar
August 16, 2023 at 3:07 PM
Thanks for your note. Glad you love this Path write. A long walk shows God's beauty. Have a great/fun day writing away................
Poet Avatar
August 15, 2023 at 3:29 PM
Beautifully penned Paula, best wishes for the contest
Goldsmith Avatar
August 16, 2023 at 3:06 PM
Thanks for your note and for your best wishes. Glad you enjoyed my write. Have a great/fun day writing away................
Rodrigues Avatar
August 15, 2023 at 1:37 PM
How beautiful, Paula!
Goldsmith Avatar
August 16, 2023 at 3:04 PM
Thanks for your note. Glad you found this to be a beautiful write. Have a great/fun day writing away................
Goldsmith Avatar
August 15, 2023 at 12:10 PM
The Path I Took Tableau ~ Date Written:8/15/2023
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