The Past I Never Had

“love and darkness and my sidearm”

This line reminds me of youthful rebelliousness
Of summer nights, out with good friends
Driving along, in a car together
Feeling as if we could live forever
No cares, no laws, no responsibilities
Just a love of life and debauchery
When I sing it, I’m there with them
This is my life, and these are my friends
It’s the wonderful past that I never had
That I can live for a minute, both good and yet bad
I’m laughing, loving, wild, and free 
Until the song ends, and with it, the fantasy

Song: The South Side by Moby

7/17/11

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 7/20/2011 8:03:00 AM
gems of words and phrases lend themsleves well in this offering, susan.. winning wishes to you! :) huggs, nette
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Date: 7/19/2011 7:12:00 PM
I really like how you did this. Wait till you see mine. It's kinda corny! (waiting to post it because right now, It seems people are not getting hits on their recent poems. too many congrats going around for all the contests. haha. Soupmail)
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Date: 7/19/2011 6:50:00 PM
Nice quote in the beginning that defines the theme of the poem, susan
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Date: 7/19/2011 4:25:00 PM
Enjoyed reading this eve..I do not know this one..Those songs can help us go into that fantasy state..Thanks for the kind review of my work..Sara
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Date: 7/19/2011 12:04:00 PM
Interesting write. I particularly like the last line. So many of our fantasies are short-lived! If this is for a contest, I wish you good luck! Love, Robert.
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