Rhoma Em Poet Couplet

The Past Calls---Swai

Somehow, before the call of morn
When misty fog drifts on hawthorns,
And daybreak hails a new sunset
I trace past moments now at rest.


SWAI
Captcha Contest of Judy Konos
4.28.2015

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Skat A April 30, 2015 at 6:15 PM Congrats Rhoma. Forever ~SKAT~

Casarah Nance April 29, 2015 at 5:21 PM Wow, this is brilliant, i love it, it could be read with a touch of darkness, or a light light a beacon, the reader has the option to see it in any possibility, really awesome.

Andrea Dietrich April 28, 2015 at 5:53 PM Beautiful. Glad I finally got to see this one.

Jan Allison April 28, 2015 at 3:55 PM beautiful imagery many congrats on your win:-) Hugs Jan xxx

Poet Destroyer A April 28, 2015 at 1:41 PM Rhoma, nice win... PD

Judy Konos April 28, 2015 at 11:54 AM Thank you for entering my contest.