The Past

Ever since I was a little kid,
I have always wanted to do more then my parents did.

After my mom split and left town
My dad was never around.

I promised my self life would not be like this anymore.
With the fighting and slamming of the doors.

I decided to go back to school once more,
For this is what I thought would help me get my foot in the door.

Now that I have only 24 credits more to get,
I will have my bachelors degree yet. 

It has been a long hard struggle for me,
ever since my parents abandon me

But the one thing I have learned all these years later
is that life will never be the same as it once was.

I'm all  grown up with  a family of my own,
And I know my kids will always want to come home.

Now for once I have the family I've always wanted 
Ever since I was that little girl trying to stand on her own two feet..




"When" contest--- Paula Swanson
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Phookan Avatar
May 5, 2011 at 6:45 AM
Intense feel on this theme.Congrats Cory on your win with this very toughing write. love,Gautami
Falotico Avatar
May 4, 2011 at 2:11 PM
Congrats Cory on a fine win!!
Horne Avatar
May 4, 2011 at 2:07 PM
Many congratulations on your win, Cory : )
Buckeridge Avatar
May 3, 2011 at 12:34 PM
Wonderful piece, congrats on your HM :o)
Taylor Avatar
May 3, 2011 at 8:47 AM
Congrats on your HM, Cory. Excellent piece. Nice going. Ralph
Sweetheart Avatar
May 3, 2011 at 4:40 AM
Congrats Cory on your HM in Paula's contest with this fantastic write my friend.. wow ..good job luv.. let us enjoy our HM's together for excellence ....
Brown Avatar
May 3, 2011 at 4:01 AM
Congratulations on your wonderful win Cory in Paula's "When" contest. Love, Carol
K. Avatar
May 2, 2011 at 11:21 PM
This is really a touching approach to the challenge, Cory-- beautiful how you grew stronger from your past and how you turned things around-- way to go for being in the winners' list :)
Dietrich Avatar
May 2, 2011 at 9:52 PM
Cory, this is sweet and heartfelt. Congratulations on your win.
Rams Avatar
April 27, 2011 at 7:17 PM
reflections of the past, will forever last. this life that you led has made you stronger for your present family and that's the way that it should be.
Sweetheart Avatar
April 27, 2011 at 1:30 PM
great insight into the early days of your life Cory.. some sad moments with the fighting and slamming of doors.. stressful for kids to endure luv..but look at u now a sweet poetess and entertaining us all with your wonderful words ..thankxx for sharing luv..
Love Avatar
April 27, 2011 at 6:02 AM
l LIKE THIS POEM. I FEEL YOU. I KIND OF HAD A ROUGH CHILDHOOD TOO.
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