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The Passion of a Jue Ju

Passionate Embrace Spring gives sweet bursts of new life rain and seed so very passionately embrace soil awaits in the lover's hot bed eternity moans for a soft virgin bride Robert J. Lindley, 07-24-2014

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Casarah Nance

Date: 8/5/2014 6:09:00 PM

Ooh eternity moans... uh huh, lovely :) Grats on your win Robert...hugs :)

Mohan Chutani

Date: 8/4/2014 9:04:00 PM

Robert, passion very nicely put. Congrats for your fine win. Mohan

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/4/2014 4:44:00 PM

That first line is spectacular!! And the symbolism of rain and seed embracing. Congrats on a well deserved win.

Paul Callus

Date: 8/4/2014 11:25:00 AM

This excellent poem is one of my favourites! Congratulations, Robert, on a fine win. // paul

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 8/4/2014 7:53:00 AM

Very passionate write and apt approach to the theme, Robert

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 8/4/2014 7:40:00 AM

And back again wid huge congrats on this winning wonderful Jue Ju Robert !

Jan Allison

Date: 8/4/2014 4:40:00 AM

Dropping back with my congratulations! Hugs Jan xxxxx

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/26/2014 10:30:00 AM

Robert this is a splendid erotic write about nature. GREAT personification and imagination. soupmail.

Robert Lindley
Date: 7/26/2014 11:51:00 AM

Thank you my friend! So busy lately caring for my 86 year old mother that I do too much in haste. I did manage to spend extra time on this entry. Your comments very appreciated...

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 7/25/2014 9:02:00 AM

Eloquent write Robert! The best Jue Ju I hv read for the contest ,, sure to place at top!

Robert Lindley
Date: 7/25/2014 9:46:00 AM

Thank you Dr. Upma. I took longer on writing this short one than I do on writing the 24 to 36 lines poems.

Robert Lindley
Date: 7/25/2014 9:03:00 AM

Thank you Jan. I took longer on writing this short one than I do on writing the 24 to 36 lines poems.

Jan Allison

Date: 7/25/2014 2:12:00 AM

Oh Nette will love this one Robert. Good luck in the contest Hugs Jan xxx