Robert Lindley Poet Verse

The Passion of a Jue Ju

Passionate Embrace

Spring gives sweet bursts of new life
rain and seed so very passionately embrace
soil awaits in the lover's hot bed
eternity moans for a soft virgin bride

Robert J. Lindley, 07-24-2014

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Casarah Nance August 5, 2014 at 6:09 PM Ooh eternity moans... uh huh, lovely :) Grats on your win Robert...hugs :)

Mohan Chutani August 4, 2014 at 9:04 PM Robert, passion very nicely put. Congrats for your fine win. Mohan

Andrea Dietrich August 4, 2014 at 4:44 PM That first line is spectacular!! And the symbolism of rain and seed embracing. Congrats on a well deserved win.

Paul Callus August 4, 2014 at 11:25 AM This excellent poem is one of my favourites! Congratulations, Robert, on a fine win. // paul

Dr.Ram Mehta August 4, 2014 at 7:53 AM Very passionate write and apt approach to the theme, Robert

Dr. Upma A. Sharma August 4, 2014 at 7:40 AM And back again wid huge congrats on this winning wonderful Jue Ju Robert !

Jan Allison August 4, 2014 at 4:40 AM Dropping back with my congratulations! Hugs Jan xxxxx

Andrea Dietrich July 26, 2014 at 10:30 AM Robert this is a splendid erotic write about nature. GREAT personification and imagination. soupmail. Robert Lindley July 26, 2014 at 11:51 AM Thank you my friend! So busy lately caring for my 86 year old mother that I do too much in haste. I did manage to spend extra time on this entry. Your comments very appreciated...

Dr. Upma A. Sharma July 25, 2014 at 9:02 AM Eloquent write Robert! The best Jue Ju I hv read for the contest ,, sure to place at top! Robert Lindley July 25, 2014 at 9:46 AM Thank you Dr. Upma. I took longer on writing this short one than I do on writing the 24 to 36 lines poems. Robert Lindley July 25, 2014 at 9:03 AM Thank you Jan. I took longer on writing this short one than I do on writing the 24 to 36 lines poems.

Jan Allison July 25, 2014 at 2:12 AM Oh Nette will love this one Robert. Good luck in the contest Hugs Jan xxx