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The Passion

in the heat of her passion myself produced geysers of life.

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Date: 3/8/2018 1:38:00 PM

nice

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 2/15/2011 5:55:00 PM

A very stong haiku.. enjoyed,..p.d.

Verlecia Fields

Date: 11/22/2010 12:36:00 AM

My imagination, went to a lot, of romantic places. This haiku is the hottest, I have ever read!

C.C Bloomsfield

Date: 11/17/2010 10:04:00 AM

Wonderful haiku

Sara Kendrick

Date: 11/15/2010 6:04:00 AM

Very descriptive work here...I was gladden at your presence at my work "He Brushed"...Your comments lifted my spirits..Sara

Nicole Sharon Brown

Date: 11/13/2010 12:32:00 PM

this is a steamy write it says so much in so few words... thanks for your generous comment... yes that piece that you commented on is nostalgic

James Peranteau

Date: 11/5/2010 4:32:00 PM

poignant...poignant indeed !....hint--> 'Flower' in my writes, are always in referance to a female...unless I specify. Much love, james

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/5/2010 10:15:00 AM

Good imagery, HOnesty!

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 11/5/2010 7:39:00 AM

Geysers of Life indeed HONESTY.. u have captured the essence of luv and passion in a few words so sweet and intense at the same time... awesome luv.. happy weekend...

Fabiyas M V

Date: 11/5/2010 5:51:00 AM

I enjoyed this haiku this evening.Powerful emotions.Thank you for commenting on my poem.Fabiyas