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The Passion

in the heat of her
 passion myself produced
    geysers of life.

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March 8, 2018 at 1:38 PM

nice

Poet Destroyer A

February 15, 2011 at 5:55 PM

A very stong haiku.. enjoyed,..p.d.

Verlecia Fields

November 22, 2010 at 12:36 AM

My imagination, went to a lot, of romantic places. This haiku is the hottest, I have ever read!

C.C Bloomsfield

November 17, 2010 at 10:04 AM

Wonderful haiku

Sara Kendrick

November 15, 2010 at 6:04 AM

Very descriptive work here...I was gladden at your presence at my work "He Brushed"...Your comments lifted my spirits..Sara

Nicole Sharon Brown

November 13, 2010 at 12:32 PM

this is a steamy write it says so much in so few words... thanks for your generous comment... yes that piece that you commented on is nostalgic

James Peranteau

November 5, 2010 at 4:32 PM

poignant...poignant indeed !....hint--> 'Flower' in my writes, are always in referance to a female...unless I specify. Much love, james

Andrea Dietrich

November 5, 2010 at 10:15 AM

Good imagery, HOnesty!

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

November 5, 2010 at 7:39 AM

Geysers of Life indeed HONESTY.. u have captured the essence of luv and passion in a few words so sweet and intense at the same time... awesome luv.. happy weekend...