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The Park Bench

shade moves down the bench I shift my seat to stay warm ~ the cloud finds me yet Submitted: 4/16/21 for Line Gauthier's one Haiku Contest Award: co-champion, 1st Place. 4/22/21

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James Marshall Goff

Date: 7/24/2021 8:45:00 PM

Yes! Great line 3 twist, Ken!

Ken Rone
Date: 7/26/2021 9:22:00 AM

Thanks James ! Your comment made me smile. I appreciate tour visit.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/13/2021 1:35:00 PM

I see this was a winner and I see why. Awesome little poem. Belated congrats

Ken Rone
Date: 6/13/2021 1:40:00 PM

You are welcome any time to review my work and offer your encouragement. Thank you so much! - Ken

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 6/2/2021 3:31:00 PM

Hello Ken, I am glad you won. This poem is wonderful. Enjoy your evening my friend.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 6/3/2021 10:14:00 AM

Hello Ken, you are welcome my friend. How are you doing? I hope all is well with you. Enjoy your day my friend.

Ken Rone
Date: 6/2/2021 7:17:00 PM

Thank you Darlene (Friend) for the compliment. It is great to hear from you again. - Ken

Sotto Poet

Date: 4/22/2021 6:32:00 PM

Hi, Ken, and congratulations for your top win, you deserve it, you penned a great Haiku// Best regards //Las

Ken Rone
Date: 4/23/2021 8:33:00 AM

How are you today Lasaad? Thank you for your friendship and compliment. - Ken

Jan Allison

Date: 4/22/2021 4:27:00 PM

you paint a perfect picture Ken, many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx

Ken Rone
Date: 4/23/2021 8:30:00 AM

Hello Jan. How are you today my busy Manxtress? Thanks for dropping in again. Looking forward to more of your work.

Christuraj Alex

Date: 4/22/2021 11:43:00 AM

Beautiful...

Ken Rone
Date: 4/23/2021 8:32:00 AM

A beautiful reply Chris. It says so much, mostly...keep writing!

Paul Callus

Date: 4/22/2021 10:25:00 AM

I have been in similar situations, Ken! Then it's vice versa in summer :) Congratulations on your fine win. Regards // paul

Ken Rone
Date: 4/23/2021 8:31:00 AM

Yes, suffered by men of a certain age. A chid of the 40's myself. - Ken

Carol Louise Moon

Date: 4/21/2021 8:14:00 PM

Ken, I really like this haiku. Congratulations on your first place win!

Ken Rone
Date: 4/21/2021 8:21:00 PM

I really like your name! You taking the time to respond is an honor. I so value your input. The placement in the contest was a shock to me. Best - Ken

Krish Radhakrishna

Date: 4/21/2021 6:01:00 PM

Very, very good!! The cloud finds me still! You might be in England like me! Congrats in your win!!

Ken Rone
Date: 4/21/2021 8:16:00 PM

Pacific NW of the USA. I live in the convergent zone behind the Olympic Mountains. Clouds come from all directions at a startling pace. Thank you for your compliment!