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The Park At Dawn

how still the park
            before dawn, when it’s dark
            moonshine leaves its mark


                 Rhyming Haiku

                   
                    12/2/2022

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Gershon Wolf

December 3, 2022 at 7:40 PM

Ha, ha! My kind of moonshine! ~ T. Toe Teller

Panagiota Romios

December 4, 2022 at 5:09 AM

Ha Ha, Bach at you! Nana Pangie Chanukah Blessings, Pangie

Elena Eagle

December 3, 2022 at 8:43 AM

A wonderful piece and so true about the hours before sunrise.

Panagiota Romios

December 3, 2022 at 4:43 PM

Hi Elena.. Thank you. Right before sunrise is a world at peace Christmas wishes, Pangie

Sam Kauffman

December 2, 2022 at 11:24 AM

YOU DID IT MY FRIEND!!! I just knew there was haiku in your poetic soul. Your words set the serene scene perfectly. Perfect ku in beautiful imagery. Hats off to you for trying this form. High fives!!! Blessings of the season to you! Can't wait to read more of your haiku!

Panagiota Romios

December 2, 2022 at 12:24 PM

Oh, dear Sam! Coming from you…..your words are as powerful, as when I get a POTD!I wondered if you saw this! And you did! You know how greatly, I admire your mastery of Haiku.You just made my Christmas arrive early…thank you for having faith in me, Sam! WOWSERS! Christmas hugs, Pangie