THE PARK AT DAWN

how still the park before dawn, when it’s dark moonshine leaves its mark Rhyming Haiku 12/2/2022

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Gershon Wolf

Date: 12/3/2022 7:40:00 PM

Ha, ha! My kind of moonshine! ~ T. Toe Teller

Panagiota Romios
Date: 12/4/2022 5:09:00 AM

Ha Ha, Bach at you! Nana Pangie Chanukah Blessings, Pangie

Elena Eagle

Date: 12/3/2022 8:43:00 AM

A wonderful piece and so true about the hours before sunrise.

Panagiota Romios
Date: 12/3/2022 4:43:00 PM

Hi Elena.. Thank you. Right before sunrise is a world at peace Christmas wishes, Pangie

Sam Kauffman

Date: 12/2/2022 11:24:00 AM

YOU DID IT MY FRIEND!!! I just knew there was haiku in your poetic soul. Your words set the serene scene perfectly. Perfect ku in beautiful imagery. Hats off to you for trying this form. High fives!!! Blessings of the season to you! Can't wait to read more of your haiku!

Panagiota Romios
Date: 12/2/2022 12:24:00 PM

Oh, dear Sam! Coming from you…..your words are as powerful, as when I get a POTD!I wondered if you saw this! And you did! You know how greatly, I admire your mastery of Haiku.You just made my Christmas arrive early…thank you for having faith in me, Sam! WOWSERS! Christmas hugs, Pangie

Stephan McBride

Date: 12/2/2022 9:59:00 AM

No matter the time God reminds us to be a light in the darkness, love it. Be still and cut out the outside noise and listen within

Panagiota Romios
Date: 12/2/2022 12:10:00 PM

Hello again , Stephen. Your observation is so fundamentally true. Christmas hugs, Pangie

Becky Forbes

Date: 12/2/2022 9:24:00 AM

The best time of day in its stillness and purity. Wonderfully written!

Panagiota Romios
Date: 12/2/2022 12:07:00 PM

Becky, I so agree with your observation. And I appreciate your visi and comment, Christmas hugs, Pangie