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The Parasite

They kissed, and kissed again 'neath the mistletoe like snow... love stifled,did not grow, so bittersweet,her lasting refrain... her swain,she did not see again. this quintain inspired by Debbie's poem ' ...a bittersweet vine' presented as a 'conceit' of her theme from nature

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Date: 7/30/2010 6:07:00 PM
enjoyed
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Date: 7/30/2010 1:07:00 PM
Very good interpretation of Debbie's poem ... enjoyed .. special words to think about with your title so unique... happy weekend.. with luv..
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Date: 7/30/2010 12:40:00 PM
Great job with this. Congratulations, Brian!
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Date: 7/30/2010 5:22:00 AM
(Giant) Congratulations Brian on your win in Deborah Guzzi's contest "Critcise Me". Love, Carol
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Date: 7/29/2010 10:20:00 PM
Congratulations Brian on your seventh place. Agape, Moses
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Date: 7/29/2010 6:00:00 AM
Wow!! I truly loved reading your words this morning Brian. Thank you for your comments on my poetry. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/29/2010 4:27:00 AM
Good luck in the contest with this excellent write..I bet she is still wondering why did he leave..Keep up the good work..Sara
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Date: 7/28/2010 9:50:00 AM
What a tittle Brian S., you have your self a lovely day..Enjoyed your poem.-LeeAnn
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