The Paradox of Time

You've seen 
what time can do 
     How 
     winds
           carve rock 
and how ancient seas 
  dumped their sediment 
on the ground
     take note 
of the changes 
Proceed cautiously 
     Our eyes have
tasted fire
     our ears have 
seen the progression of time
Let's take joy in 
    nature's dance
   Let the earth 
      take a few more whirls 
wait patiently for  
the inevitable march 
of the days, months, millenia
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Amadore Avatar
January 11, 2012 at 3:42 PM
Congratulations...an interesting piece.
Brown Avatar
January 3, 2012 at 8:12 AM
Congrats on making it through the 1st round of PoetrySoup International Contest. Wishing you the best Matthew. Love, Carol
Dietrich Avatar
December 28, 2011 at 5:19 PM
I'm glad to see the one of yours in the final round of the big soup contest is a FAVE of mine already. Congrats, Matt.
Witt-King Avatar
December 6, 2010 at 8:40 PM
Lovely here too, Matthew. Time inevitably marches on. Thanks again for your comment. I have to research Rubiyat...that will be interesting.
Kendrick Avatar
December 4, 2010 at 1:48 PM
Good one ..Enjoyed your work..The earth is constanty changing sometimes very slowly sometimes rapidly..Sara
Maverick Avatar
December 4, 2010 at 11:32 AM
thank you for your return comment,Matthew the orignal i wrote was in German, obviously there is something lost some people say, from each different discription however i like the effect! in that something beyond my control is given life in that process, i even used sort of off centre words in the same poem last week to this end.
Maverick Avatar
December 4, 2010 at 10:31 AM
liked the almost timless echo that runs with this poem, and the cadence of its words, Matthew.
Neels Avatar
December 3, 2010 at 9:20 PM
Wow Matthew, you captured time in all facets and did it brilliantly.. Enjoyed this morning ;-) Wilma
Brown Avatar
December 3, 2010 at 9:15 AM
Amazing. Enjoyed reading your poetry today Matthew and wish you the best in the contest. Love, Carol
Dietrich Avatar
December 2, 2010 at 8:22 PM
oh, boy, you GOT it here in spades. And march of time, like march of the penguins. hahaha. Inevitable. A fav for this one. it's magnificent.
Sweetheart Avatar
December 2, 2010 at 4:21 PM
Amazing write Matthew and good luck if u entered in the contest.. a powerful last line my friend and the message is clear... enjoyed and enjoyed ..with luv..
Haick Avatar
December 2, 2010 at 3:12 PM
Always exceptional writes you pen, Matthew!! This is for my favs' list! Just love the line "...proceed cautiously Our eyes have tasted fie...." This is one for the winners' list I'm sure.. Love, audrey
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