The Paper Doll-Septolet

Floating
as kites,  
it rises 
above,


the paper doll
wanders through
the endless night.



Entered in nette onclaud's contest,
" Septolet The Puppet "
written by Andrew Crisci
on 9/23/ 2012
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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September 23, 2012 at 10:21 PM
Nice write for Nette's contest. Seems you have the same issue I had. Just wondering, where the flavour is? I wrote one and had to change it, to add flavour and fabric. You have the paper as fabric, but its a challenge to get the two items in such a short poem. Great poem as it stands. Lee
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