The Palms

THE PALMS
As dawn child brings a new illumination
Among the palms are hints of gentle motion
Their fronds now stir in elegant activation
Like ladies with refinement: a devotion
Their fluent gestures smoothing interaction
Smiles bows and fans precluding all infraction

As day advances so increasing breeze
Lends greater life to trees and single boughs
The movement still of graceful bending ease
With strength and rhythm in their measures now
Our ladies pair with gallants to advance
The shapes and movements of a courtly dance

With each increase of wind, zephyr to gale
Their motions are more restless in reaction
'til branches thrash in protest at the travail
Separate or clinging daring final fraction
At the end they live the turmoil staying whole
And return to temper tranquil free of toll

Have these trees collective recall - eight days in history 
They were spread with glad 'Hosannas!' to greet a King
But in less than a week to witness the tragic mystery
When darkness enveloped the land, and all hope took wing
Did they thrash and writhe to protest unjust, cruel inequity
Yet, the third day, stand in new hope and beauteous serenity

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017



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Date: 2/11/2020 4:14:00 AM
A wonderful poem regarding Palm Sunday, Geoffrey. Congrats on your placement! Charlie
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Date: 2/11/2020 1:52:00 AM
Well done Geoffrey.
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Date: 3/12/2018 4:45:00 PM
Well done, Geoffrey. Congrats on your winning poem.
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Date: 7/31/2017 9:18:00 PM
What an extraordinary write about Palm Sunday and what followed ... I wrote a series of Haiku once all from the viewpoint of the tree that was used for the cross, and this has a similar but even MORE creative perspective. Really loved this, Geoffrey, and a well-deserved win!
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Geoffrey Brewer
Date: 3/3/2018 10:04:00 PM
Gregory, please forgive the unconscionable delay in acknowledging your eloquent and kind comments. I confess that this poem started out as a purely descriptive piece - then the allegory came to me.
Date: 7/31/2017 6:06:00 PM
Hi Geoffrey, a beautiful write. Congratulations on your win :)
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Geoffrey Brewer
Date: 3/3/2018 10:06:00 PM
A delayed thank-you for your comment and kind words.
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