The Painted Rose

The painted rose was placed on her coffin
Then removed when they lowered her down
Cast aside with the discarded trash
That was lying closeby on the ground

A little girl around nine or ten
Picked it up and took it back home
Here on vacation to visit her family
But now on her way back to Rome

She gave the rose to her Grandmother
Who carried it all the way to Japan
Who then gave the rose to her waitress
For lending her a helping hand

The waitress gives the rose to a stranger
Who was now on his way back to France
Who gave the rose to his daughter
As her whole class was watching her dance

She then gave the rose to her teacher
Who was leaving to start a new life
He was on his way to America
To be with his children and wife

He then gives the rose to his brother
Who's still grieving the death of his bride
He places the rose on her gravestone
Where it started the day that she died
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Phipps Avatar
May 31, 2010 at 4:15 PM
Profound, well written and mesmerizing. I was moved. Thank you so very much for commenting on my most recent poem about my dad, 'Daddy's Little Girl,' it has been difficult and I am still grieving much. He wasn't ill and died in his sleep only a month ago. I am writing to help the healing. And, I had to respond with gratitude to you in particular, as his name was also Larry. Your poems have life. Refreshing.
Taylor Avatar
May 30, 2010 at 6:50 PM
That's quite a story,Larry. Awesome. Thanks for your congrats. Next time I'm in Tenn, I'll swing by your hometown (where ever it is) and for sure the coffee's on me! Is there a Duncan Donuts nearby? Till nx time ...Ralph
Mehta Avatar
May 30, 2010 at 5:56 PM
Only the painted rose can have such journey. The painted rose is good metaphor used in this poem.
Richards Avatar
May 30, 2010 at 4:26 PM
Such profound sadness in this beautiful poem. A story and the making of a legend. Nicely done! Love, Carrie
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