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The Pain of Tiredness

This subject has caught my attention when one night I hardly slept at all one day I suffered extremely sore back realising both had a pain even for the tall After that night of little sleep for me the next day I was tired like never before it felt like a pain from deep within dragging me down paining my inner core I cried from within so agonising feeling this was so very real the back pain now seemed nothing compared to this tired I now feel Every bone felt like desiring to cry running over my skin was many a tear the wetness of tears so shocking my inner self recoiled felt real fear The next day brought inner revival a good night's sleep was exactly my need felt now within real joy and relief tire no more, gone now I'm free

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Date: 5/17/2020 10:55:00 AM
Physical pain of any sort and lack of sleep - one compounds on the other and makes us useless the next day - well our ages might have something to do with it also! Well penned Gordon - enjoyed your write. Hugs Jennifer.
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Gordon Mcconnell
Date: 5/17/2020 11:21:00 AM
Hi Jennifer, glad you enjoyed my piece and agreed with your observations . Have a blessed day, keep safe and well, Gordon

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