The Pain I Feel

Right now my heart is full of pain.

Each day it's getting harder for me to maintain.

Because it's cold and I can't stand the rain.

And just because I'm a gangster society is disdain.

Disdain with my way of living.

Now they got me wondering will I ever be forgiving.

Will society ever forgive me for the choices I made.

Even thou I'm a proud American I still feel betrayed.

Now I'm bleeding from within because I'm society slave.

Deprave by this world but trap within this crime wave.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009


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Date: 11/7/2009 5:01:00 PM
Interesting thoughts put to pen. We all make mistakes and it takes times of right living for all people to forget the bad and begin to see the good and of course some never forgive or forget. Keep writing. Sara
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Date: 10/16/2009 10:27:00 AM
sweethawt i suggest you fix your spelling it would help this poem out alot. in america we are all betrayed. the place one called free and the home of the brave. now rubbel of what it once was. filled with crime and sickening scociety. judgement is crule, and in this world used too often. you will be forgiven, it just depends on whos forgiveness you are looking for....keep writing crio xo Raiin
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