The Outside Observer

He's an outsider to the pain I feel
Oblivious and happy-
When with her
Like a thief in the night I want to steal
His heart
But it was never mine from the start
I watch
This time the outsider
An invisible particle of air
All the fire
Extinguished out of me
Pathetic and lonely
My feelings unspared
A smile etched on my face
So that the hurt is never showcased
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Hicks Avatar
October 14, 2014 at 4:06 PM
Brilliant ending! I have been in the same spot where I try to smile-it-off when deep-down I'm really angry. Bet it's good to get it off your chest though, eh?
Buil Avatar
October 26, 2014 at 3:22 AM
Ughhh tell me about it! It's so frustrating. Had to let it out somehow. Thanks Timothy! Always appreciate your comments!
Jones Avatar
November 20, 2013 at 7:11 PM
Wonderful poem...and attitude...everyone goes through this..hang in there...
Buil Avatar
October 26, 2014 at 3:23 AM
Thank you. It's hard. I'm hanging!!
Lamoureux Avatar
November 14, 2013 at 5:29 PM
I have been there! Well expressed. Long time no see, I hope all is well with you.
Buil Avatar
October 26, 2014 at 3:24 AM
Aww thanks! :) Let's just say my life has been a roller coaster. But. It's good to be back!
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