The Outside and the Inside Are Two Different Things

On the outside she's angry
On the outside she's cold as ice
But
On the inside she's crying
On the inside she's wondering 
How close she is to dying
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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January 10, 2016 at 12:19 PM
Very clever the way you left out the punctuation... lt gives the piece an even greater 'umph!' Well done Katie!! Best wishes, Keith
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