Cory Long Poet Rhyme

The Other World

Picturing all the ideas you’re CREATIVITY can create.
Open your eyes look past whet everyone else sees.
EVENTUALLY everyone will be able to see, the hidden world of writing.
Treasure the talents you have been granted.
Remembering how great it felt to hold a pen.
Yearning for more, now that you have had a taste of this other world.

Perfect atmosphere for you to loose yourself, in your thoughts. 
Automatic INFUSION holds her captive, while ILLUSION keeps her entertained.
Limitations are no concern to this determined poet.
As she achieves ultimate success in getting to know herself,
Captured in her own world, it is INEVITABLE she will be back again.
Exhilaration over takes her vessel one more time as she writes in her chair tonight.




cory long

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Dr.Ram Mehta May 14, 2011 at 5:29 PM Wonderful entry to the contest, cory. Nice flow

Michael J. Falotico May 14, 2011 at 5:46 AM Cory, Linda will love this Im sure as I did..Good write my friend....Michael

Caroline Cécile Delacroix May 13, 2011 at 8:44 PM Well done, Cory! Good luck in the contest. And thank you for your comments on my poem. Caroline.

Anne Rutherford May 13, 2011 at 4:57 PM Cory . great work here. I'm happy to see you are in a contest. Lulu is back up , will you look in on it now? Do soup mail. Anne

Dr.Ram Mehta May 13, 2011 at 3:10 PM wonderful entry to the contest with this lovely poetic expressions, cory

Carolyn Devonshire May 13, 2011 at 3:09 PM It is in the midst of losing ourselves in illusion that creativity often strikes. So you write each night in a chair. Inspiration comes to me most often at the beach or when I'm outdoors. It is then I feel most in touch with "the other world" you describe so eloquently. Best wishes in the contest, Cory! Love, Carolyn

Poet Destroyer A May 13, 2011 at 3:04 PM Nice Cory, you are a brilliant young poet... and I'm one who enjoys clever poems... LOL.. u can say I'm p.d. the semi-braniac... this is going to my favorites... also keeping the thoughts alive until we meet the other world... xoolio.. Cory... take care... p.d.

Kash Poet May 13, 2011 at 5:33 AM Lovely write Cory.Best wishes for the contest.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart May 13, 2011 at 5:07 AM thankxx for supporting my current contest cory.. good luck .. hope we have no problems this time around ... will read fully at juding time thankx for always supporting my endeavors on P.S. ..