The Other Side of My Heart

The other side of my heart 
Is like a crystal filled with hate 
And unwanted desires 
A desire to do what's wrong 
When everyone knows 
I should do right 
Hating the fact I'm alone 
And no place to call home 
Caught inbetween a lie
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Onate Avatar
July 16, 2009 at 7:53 PM
we all have 2 sides on our harts bun not all of us know how to use the wisely nice write very truthful!!!
Moreno Avatar
April 7, 2009 at 11:51 AM
We all have another side and you did a great job describing yours. Keep writing and painting the canvas with your paint of words...Raul
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March 28, 2009 at 2:52 PM
Dear Anna: Written right from your heart, and it shows. Good way of expressing your emotions. Thanks for reading my poem. I'm so very glad you liked it. Love, Janice Herzog xoxo
Lopez Avatar
March 25, 2009 at 8:39 PM
the second line is especially nice. keep up the good work!
Goff Avatar
March 25, 2009 at 5:10 PM
expressions common to all, well done Anna! keep writing!! Best Always, Jim
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