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The Other Side of My Heart

The other side of my heart Is like a crystal filled with hate And unwanted desires A desire to do what's wrong When everyone knows I should do right Hating the fact I'm alone And no place to call home Caught inbetween a lie

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 7/16/2009 7:53:00 PM
we all have 2 sides on our harts bun not all of us know how to use the wisely nice write very truthful!!!
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Date: 4/7/2009 11:51:00 AM
We all have another side and you did a great job describing yours. Keep writing and painting the canvas with your paint of words...Raul
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Date: 3/28/2009 2:52:00 PM
Dear Anna: Written right from your heart, and it shows. Good way of expressing your emotions. Thanks for reading my poem. I'm so very glad you liked it. Love, Janice Herzog xoxo
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Date: 3/25/2009 8:39:00 PM
the second line is especially nice. keep up the good work!
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Date: 3/25/2009 5:10:00 PM
expressions common to all, well done Anna! keep writing!! Best Always, Jim
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