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The Other Side of Me

Remember how we wrote our names, Across the sky and made it shine? How this big great world Seemed like just yours and mine? Remember those wonderful old days; When life was just one beautiful song? Why were we happy even in the worst of times? Maybe we were just the right kinda wrong! Remember spending all our time admiring each other? It seems like just yesterday. Getting back to that golden era, Looks like there is no possible way. Remember the true love we shared? Pride in others being happy for us clearly seen. Now that you got into hiding; The world acts like one huge drama queen. Remember the care you took,the promise you made; That you will never leave me whatever i do? Breaking it all you suddenly vanished, Without leaving even the slightest clue. Lets reveal your identity; Everyone is wondering who you could possibly be, I know you better than anyone else ever can; Cause your my perfection, the other side of ME

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 12/1/2010 3:57:00 AM
excellent!
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Date: 11/30/2010 3:45:00 PM
Soup Mail..luv..
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Date: 11/29/2010 5:04:00 AM
Soup Mail Karnika..
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Date: 11/29/2010 3:22:00 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Reema. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors. You can look to the left side of the main page and find lots of information on PoetrySoup including contests by members of PoetrySoup and contests by the PoetrySoup site also which you as a new member and us oldies also may enter. If you have questions please feel free to ask ANYONE here. We are ALL willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/26/2010 8:34:00 PM
Welcome to Poetry Soup.. so enjoyed reading your creative write tonight .. hope your time on Soup will be fun and fantastic.. enjoy a happy weekend with luv..
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Date: 11/26/2010 6:07:00 PM
I simply loved it Reema.......you have a long way to go!
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Date: 11/26/2010 1:13:00 PM
passionate and sentimental thoughts quite expressed well on love, Reema
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Date: 11/26/2010 6:51:00 AM
Very beautiful poem Reema.I liked it.
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