The Other Side of Me

Remember  how we wrote our names,
Across the sky and made it shine?
How this big great world
Seemed like just yours and mine?

Remember those wonderful old days;
When life was just one beautiful song?
Why were we happy even in the worst of times?
Maybe we were just the right kinda wrong!

Remember spending all our time admiring each other?
It seems like just yesterday.
Getting back to that golden era,
Looks like there is no possible way.

Remember the true love we shared?
Pride in others being happy for us clearly seen.
Now that you got into hiding;
The world acts like one huge drama queen.

Remember the care you took,the promise you made;
That you will never leave me whatever i do?
Breaking it all you suddenly vanished,
Without leaving even the slightest clue.

Lets reveal your identity;
Everyone is wondering who you could possibly be,
I know you better than anyone else ever can;
Cause your my perfection, the other side of ME
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Palli Avatar
December 1, 2010 at 3:57 AM
excellent!
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January 22, 2026 at 10:16 AM
Thank you
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November 30, 2010 at 3:45 PM
Soup Mail..luv..
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January 22, 2026 at 10:16 AM
Thank you
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November 29, 2010 at 5:04 AM
Soup Mail Karnika..
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November 29, 2010 at 3:22 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Reema. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors. You can look to the left side of the main page and find lots of information on PoetrySoup including contests by members of PoetrySoup and contests by the PoetrySoup site also which you as a new member and us oldies also may enter. If you have questions please feel free to ask ANYONE here. We are ALL willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
Karnika Avatar
January 22, 2026 at 10:17 AM
Thank you
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November 26, 2010 at 8:34 PM
Welcome to Poetry Soup.. so enjoyed reading your creative write tonight .. hope your time on Soup will be fun and fantastic.. enjoy a happy weekend with luv..
Sundara Avatar
November 26, 2010 at 6:07 PM
I simply loved it Reema.......you have a long way to go!
Karnika Avatar
January 22, 2026 at 10:17 AM
Thank you
Mehta Avatar
November 26, 2010 at 1:13 PM
passionate and sentimental thoughts quite expressed well on love, Reema
Karnika Avatar
January 22, 2026 at 10:17 AM
Thank you
Poet Avatar
November 26, 2010 at 6:51 AM
Very beautiful poem Reema.I liked it.
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January 22, 2026 at 10:17 AM
Thank you
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