The Opponent


"The Opponent" 

Something familiar
breezes across
the smile 

you balk 
at the familiarity
for a very short while

the opponent 
opens your windows
stealth like on pause

softly 
sensuously
like a cat

for a split 
second
violation recognised

and blithely 
dismissed as 
ridiculousness

yet like an 
unwelcome intruder
slides the door open

en garde 
lethal 
messages

despatched
and plundered
sliced, and red

the comeback
cleanly 
murdered

(LadyLabyrinth / 2023)
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Goldsmith Avatar
January 18, 2023 at 9:25 AM
A creative write. We are our worst opponent. Then comes family, friends and co-workers. Guess that is life. Love should be first but gets kicked to the end. Have a great/blessed day.......................
Labyrinth Avatar
January 18, 2023 at 10:13 AM
Thank you Paula. xx
Labyrinth Avatar
January 18, 2023 at 4:16 AM
"Intruder"/Peter Gabriel.
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January 18, 2023 at 4:19 AM
https://youtu.be/vAzUh_H7yV0
Labyrinth Avatar
January 18, 2023 at 4:16 AM
The result of too much ...'true crime'. ;)
Labyrinth Avatar
January 18, 2023 at 3:54 AM
TILDA SWINTON/ GENTLE MONSTER 2017
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January 18, 2023 at 3:54 AM
https://youtu.be/IWCcP1GIodc
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