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The Opponent

"The Opponent" Something familiar breezes across the smile you balk at the familiarity for a very short while the opponent opens your windows stealth like on pause softly sensuously like a cat for a split second violation recognised and blithely dismissed as ridiculousness yet like an unwelcome intruder slides the door open en garde lethal messages despatched and plundered sliced, and red the comeback cleanly murdered (LadyLabyrinth / 2023)

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Date: 1/18/2023 9:25:00 AM
A creative write. We are our worst opponent. Then comes family, friends and co-workers. Guess that is life. Love should be first but gets kicked to the end. Have a great/blessed day.......................
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Lady Labyrinth
Date: 1/18/2023 10:13:00 AM
Thank you Paula. xx
Date: 1/18/2023 4:16:00 AM
"Intruder"/Peter Gabriel.
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Lady Labyrinth
Date: 1/18/2023 4:19:00 AM
https://youtu.be/vAzUh_H7yV0
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Lady Labyrinth
Date: 1/18/2023 4:16:00 AM
The result of too much ...'true crime'. ;)
Date: 1/18/2023 3:54:00 AM
TILDA SWINTON/ GENTLE MONSTER 2017
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Date: 1/18/2023 3:54:00 AM
https://youtu.be/IWCcP1GIodc

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