Robert L. Hinshaw Poet Couplet

The Opal Is a Very Special Gem

Every color of the rainbow is so artistically arrayed,

In each magnificent opal so brilliantly displayed!

Each stone is unique in its varied and colorful design,

And I have two very special reasons why it is a favorite of mine.

My only sister was named Opal who to me was very dear.

Though she now resides in Paradise, for her I yet shed a tear.

And since I was spawned in October, the opal is my birthstone.

Oh, Lordy!  I'm reminded I'll soon reach that eighty-sixth milestone! 

(Favorite is the opal size 6 for Vera)

Entry for Carolyn Devonshire's "A Gem For Your Verse" Contest

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Joe Maverick November 6, 2016 at 3:45 PM Enjoyed this piece Bob, I used to have an opal ring, many moons ago I can recall its lively colours.' I hope you do well with this one..)

Andrea Dietrich October 26, 2016 at 8:47 PM robert, I love how you personalized this poem with info about your family and yourself. I enjoyed this a lot. Congrats.

Sara Kendrick October 26, 2016 at 3:10 PM Your poem was delightful so glad you wrote a gem of a poem..Congratulations on your placement..Sara Robert L. Hinshaw October 26, 2016 at 4:28 PM Thank you Sara and best to you - bob h

Teddy Kimathi October 26, 2016 at 1:19 PM Congrats Robert, for your WIN with this wonderful piece!! ;-)

Carolyn Devonshire October 26, 2016 at 10:56 AM Your sister inspired wonderful poetry, Bob. Congratulations on your win! Hugs, Carolyn

Daniel Turner October 22, 2016 at 10:13 AM Opals are really beautiful, Mr Bob as well as is your poem. Happy birthday and may you have many many more.

Jan Allison October 21, 2016 at 5:39 PM What a lovely poem - the stone holds such special memories for you:-) I love opals Robert - I have a black opal on a necklace and a little ring with the usual white opals on it - gosh I see its your birthday soon I hope you have a wonderful day:-) hugs Jan xx7

Connie Marcum Wong October 21, 2016 at 4:59 PM It is indeed a special stone Robert. I never knew of the deep rainbow turquoise color of this gem until I began flying to Sydney. I thought they were all that milky iridescent white that is so common to see. I still want to get a real dark colored opal one day, but they are a bit too pricey for me still. I enjoyed your tribute to this most wonderful stone and want to wish you an early Happy Birthday my friend! It is beautiful! Blessings, Connie : ) 7