The Only Way Life Makes Sense

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The Only Way Life Makes Sense

Life only makes sense if we can relate it to values which last
Think of people who have meant something to you from the past

Parents, siblings, friends, teachers 
 Jesus,marriage partners and preachers

All their influence on us is vast
Remove one person, we would be different
Maybe less fortunate if asked

Seeking fame and fortune as goals you most cherish
Many wealthy and famous sought this
Then through suicide or overdose perish

God's love for us through Jesus is what makes life make sense
Being kind and loving to others even at our own expense

Life makes sense if someone might think of us one day
Grateful in their life  we passed their way

Sharing  relationships, love, blessings leave lasting impressions
To both the giver and receiver more valuable than any possessions

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019



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Date: 2/16/2020 10:10:00 PM
What a wonderful write. I love it. Have a beautiful day.....
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Shirley Rebstock
Date: 2/17/2020 9:30:00 AM
Thank you, You, too
Date: 1/29/2020 4:18:00 PM
It is kindness and love that do make life worth living, Shirley. It's the people we meet who have these qualities that make us appreciate life more. As you say, it's not money that brings happiness. Beautifully penned! Best wishes, Carolyn
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Shirley Rebstock
Date: 2/17/2020 9:30:00 AM
Thanks I appreciate your stopping by and comment
Date: 9/8/2019 6:16:00 PM
Hello Shirley Rebstock, I like this poem and i agree with this poem message. Have anice evening my friend.
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Shirley Rebstock
Date: 9/10/2019 7:45:00 PM
Thank you
Date: 8/19/2019 4:12:00 PM
You seem to know the secret to a meaningful contented life dear poet. You have penned so much truth here that it delights my senses to read it. Have a great evening Shirley. Thanks for stopping by
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Shirley Rebstock
Date: 9/10/2019 7:46:00 PM
Thank you
Date: 8/18/2019 2:17:00 PM
Absolutely spot on! Great poem! Ron
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Shirley Rebstock
Date: 8/19/2019 5:25:00 PM
Thanks for stopping by and commenting. Read several of your poems, too and enjoyed.
Date: 8/10/2019 12:04:00 PM
So true my friend. Lovely written truths for all... Hugs. Ann
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Shirley Rebstock
Date: 8/19/2019 5:23:00 PM
Thank you. I enjoyed reading some of your poems, too.
Date: 8/8/2019 1:19:00 PM
Nicely written lines with deep rooted meanings dear friend. With best wishes...Ravindra K Kapoor
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Shirley Rebstock
Date: 8/8/2019 6:31:00 PM
Thank you, best wishes to you, too.
Date: 8/7/2019 6:48:00 PM
A wonderful poet, you will always be on my list as a poet of extreme talent.
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Shirley Rebstock
Date: 8/7/2019 11:10:00 PM
Thank you so much. That really touches my heart.
Date: 8/7/2019 10:02:00 AM
A very profound poem, beautifully written. I share every word of it!
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Shirley Rebstock
Date: 8/7/2019 10:09:00 AM
Thank you, it was inspired by a Sunday sermon
Date: 8/7/2019 9:44:00 AM
We are all exactly where we are supposed to be to learn the lessons we are here to learn. Our lives do touch others and have a ripple effect that reaches many. A lovely poem Shirley! I agree with your words of wisdom. Aloha, Connie : )
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Shirley Rebstock
Date: 8/7/2019 10:07:00 AM
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Shirley Rebstock
Date: 8/7/2019 9:46:00 AM
True, thank you
Date: 8/7/2019 9:11:00 AM
Hi Shirley. I really like your poem. It sends a positive message that we shouldn't take anything for granted. Well done.
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Shirley Rebstock
Date: 8/7/2019 9:47:00 AM
Thank you. You are right.
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