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The only black swan on the Lake

She swam so beautifully captivating the sky mesmerizing the rivers edge she panders about with such grace owning her own dreams she caters to fulfillment honored by her beauty moving with strength confidence as on lookers watch her sun bathe in her blackness adorned by flaws made her even more brilliant this wondrous creature before us raved in the glory of self assurance a masterpiece of essence created by God as she swam over the gleaming pond bowing her head beneath cool waters shaking off her tail feathers the mere wonder revealed

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Date: 6/4/2024 6:40:00 AM
Yolanda, this is a remarkable piece. It can be interpreted on so many levels. I hope you feel really good about this one swan!
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Date: 5/29/2024 10:42:00 AM
I enjoyed reading your wonderful write. A swan on a lake is a beautiful thing to see. Have A Blessed Day Writing Away..........
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Yolanda Nicholsen
Date: 5/31/2024 10:32:00 AM
Thank you so much Paula many blessings to you have a wonderful weekend.

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