The Ones I Have Lost

As I go through my day, they are by my side, 
Following me, watching me and also being my guide. 

These are the angels of my loved ones that passed, 
When I know their near me,  I want this feeling to last. 

I never had much family, separated by distance, 
Sometimes I felt like my world was of non-existence. 

The few I loved so much and held so dear, 
My grandfather, grandmother and father are no longer here.

But when I smell my dads cologne or hear grandmas voice in my ears, 
I hold in my heart their near me and it rids me of fears. 

I certainly must say there is not a day that goes by, 
That I do not think of them and softly cry. 

I always pray that they will visit me while I sleep, 
Dreaming of them is a wonderful feeling that goes so deep. 

I'll miss you everyday until I am no longer on earth,
When I see you all again, it will be like a rebirth.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015



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Date: 2/11/2016 10:51:00 AM
It's true. Our loved ones are always with us. Beautiful, Debra.
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Date: 2/10/2016 2:44:00 AM
very touching poem , thanks sharing
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Date: 2/9/2016 5:32:00 AM
well penned debra, telling your loss so beautifully with nice rhyme and good imagery. nicely done indeed!
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Debra Baviello
Date: 2/9/2016 11:51:00 AM
Thank you so much for your kind words Writing this really touched home.
Date: 2/8/2016 2:55:00 AM
Debra, this is a very lovely tribute to loved ones who have passed. I believe they watch over us until they meet us again. Congratulations on it being featured!
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Debra Baviello
Date: 2/9/2016 11:52:00 AM
Thank you..Writing this brought back emotional memories but it was well worth it.
Date: 1/28/2015 7:05:00 AM
very sensitive poem , I like it
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Debra Baviello
Date: 1/28/2015 7:09:00 AM
Thank you.
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