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The One Foot After the Other Man

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For Select a Feb 25 Posted Poetry Contest sponsored by Brian Strand

Everything's broken down again. The sky is filled with rain. The blood not flowing down the drain is bound to leave a stain. Where is hope to be found when it has just been drowned? He is the guy who can - the one foot after the other man.

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Date: 2/16/2025 10:32:00 AM
So interesting! You are incredibly talented! One of my favorite poets here!
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David Crandall
Date: 2/16/2025 5:14:00 PM
Thanks so much Kim! That's such a great compliment that you would like my poetry!

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