The One

In the land of no remorse,
No return, no purpose.
There is a man with sympathy,
For those of few, the more to bleed.
He stands among the lot of many,
To those with sin, won't be let in,
And in the end they will hope,
But to find, there isn't any.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Williams Avatar
December 8, 2017 at 9:01 AM
Tis True, Tis True. And Congrats for your Featured to share.
Bleeding Ink Avatar
October 4, 2015 at 11:41 PM
Very nice, He knew no sin hence became a sin. His the author and the finisher of my faith. I love your poem,
Videnova Avatar
September 30, 2015 at 8:29 AM
Brilliant poem ;-)
Matt Avatar
September 29, 2015 at 4:58 AM
GOOD ONE WELCOME PHATT
Williams Avatar
September 28, 2015 at 11:55 AM
Loved all your poems. Congrats and welcome to the club.
Black Blacharczyk Avatar
September 28, 2015 at 9:48 AM
'In the land of no remorse' pretty well sums up a society where individuals become a number and their pain falls on deaf ears.
Viswan Bhatia Avatar
September 28, 2015 at 3:46 AM
Lovely and elevating poem... HE will never fail us if we believe HIM with complete surrender
Devnath  Avatar
September 27, 2015 at 3:39 PM
It's a great instinct of ours that God is there and his mercy will fall upon even after sin. Nicely done my poet friend. 7 i feel. Loved always,bl
Lindley Avatar
September 20, 2015 at 10:40 PM
Faith in he, stands for life Accept to let it be, fear not any strife. If your heart he does touch You are saved and blessed so much. Great first poem of yours that I've read. A7
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September 18, 2015 at 6:21 PM
Criss, I wish this world was without sin. We still have a chance, even in the afterlife I believe we have one more chance of redemption. Love LINDA
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