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The One

In the land of no remorse, No return, no purpose. There is a man with sympathy, For those of few, the more to bleed. He stands among the lot of many, To those with sin, won't be let in, And in the end they will hope, But to find, there isn't any.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 12/8/2017 9:01:00 AM
Tis True, Tis True. And Congrats for your Featured to share.
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Date: 10/4/2015 11:41:00 PM
Very nice, He knew no sin hence became a sin. His the author and the finisher of my faith. I love your poem,
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Date: 9/30/2015 8:29:00 AM
Brilliant poem ;-)
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Date: 9/29/2015 4:58:00 AM
GOOD ONE WELCOME PHATT
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Date: 9/28/2015 11:55:00 AM
Loved all your poems. Congrats and welcome to the club.
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Date: 9/28/2015 9:48:00 AM
'In the land of no remorse' pretty well sums up a society where individuals become a number and their pain falls on deaf ears.
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Date: 9/28/2015 3:46:00 AM
Lovely and elevating poem... HE will never fail us if we believe HIM with complete surrender
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Date: 9/27/2015 3:39:00 PM
It's a great instinct of ours that God is there and his mercy will fall upon even after sin. Nicely done my poet friend. 7 i feel. Loved always,bl
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Date: 9/20/2015 10:40:00 PM
Faith in he, stands for life Accept to let it be, fear not any strife. If your heart he does touch You are saved and blessed so much. Great first poem of yours that I've read. A7
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Date: 9/18/2015 6:21:00 PM
Criss, I wish this world was without sin. We still have a chance, even in the afterlife I believe we have one more chance of redemption. Love LINDA
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