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The one whom I never loved at first one that I never had an idea of one outstanding in beauty And her knowledge spoke. The disappointment that caused you a smile The coin paid to save my poverty And the pain that took away my joy one I have to bare at times An achievement never dreamt of

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 5/24/2015 11:20:00 PM
THOMAS, Congratulations on having your poem featured this week. SKAT love
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Date: 5/13/2015 12:13:00 PM
Thomas, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry when you are ready :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@"
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Date: 5/12/2015 2:44:00 PM
enjoyed this ballad Thomas~luv skat~
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Date: 5/12/2015 2:13:00 PM
- A new "poet" at the P- Soup :) - I welcome you with your first good poem, Thomas Bron :) - I hope you will find much pleasure to share your words and thoughts here with us - Best of luck! - // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 5/12/2015 1:59:00 PM
THOMASBRON. Thank you for sharing, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 5/12/2015 9:05:00 AM
I enjoyed your poetry very much. Thank You and a warm welcome to Soup....Keep up the good writes....
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Date: 5/12/2015 6:48:00 AM
welcome to soup Thomasbron very nice 1st poem I hope to see you post many more do read other poets poems and comment and in return they will read yours. Once more welcome hugs 7
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