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The One

from day one i knew she was the one the best thing under the sun from the first time i added her she is the only one i prefer. i still remember the first night we talked and what was said thinking about the road ahead. the first kiss when we met. i will never forget. we talked for hours outside the gate the feeling was so great. we been threw a lot over the years. shed many tears. pass me a knife i will give her my life. something is always on my mind. that cant be declined its really hard to find. or am i just to blind. give me that sign please tell me you're mine.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 6/14/2010 3:41:00 AM
I second Anthony's comment.. Excellent piece - het dit baie geniet :) WN
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Date: 6/14/2010 3:10:00 AM
Excellent write, ready to die for the one you love. Nice piece.
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