The Old Weathered Barn

"My heart still feels those times spent in the warmth - from the poem 'What the eye sees the heart cannot forget."   (A line from an Eve Roper poem)



Spent our summers as kids
on Grandpa and Grandma's farm,
always something to do after chores,
we learned to ride horses bareback
and enjoyed racing them on a track.

An old weathered barn stood on a hill,
for years it leaned to the left,
a fun place to play hide and seek,
it was dark and dank and held some cats,
they were the mouser acrobats.

On Sundays we all went to church,
feeling squeaky clean with bright smiles,
carried Bibles to Sunday School
and listened to the teacher carefully,
behaving our best quite dutifully.

Grandma's cooking was the best,
she made all her food from scratch,
baking breads, pies and cakes,
delicious roasts for all to eat,
always followed by a surprise treat.

The years have passed and we
are all grown up and times have changed,
the old weathered barn is no more,
it fell down on a stormy night,
no longer a shelter at its hilly site.

Grandma and Grandpa lived long lives,
both are buried on the farm they loved,
not far from the farmhouse near the willow,
each time we visit the farm we sit a while
on a bench nearby and visit with a smile.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Roper Avatar
April 13, 2020 at 5:28 PM
Back with congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve
Walker Avatar
April 13, 2020 at 5:45 PM
Eve, thank you for your congratulations. Hugs, Sonia.
Andresen Avatar
April 13, 2020 at 2:05 PM
- A lovely poetic poem ... like it alot, Sonia ... congratulations on your win :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Walker Avatar
April 13, 2020 at 2:34 PM
Anne-Lise, so glad you like my barn poem. Thank you, Sonia.
One Avatar
April 13, 2020 at 7:24 AM
A lovely nostalgic story.. How beautiful your grandparents are buried there.. a shame about the barn though.. Congrats on your placement in the contest.
Walker Avatar
April 13, 2020 at 8:22 AM
Silent One, thank you for your kind words and placement of my poem. ~ Sonia
Roper Avatar
March 27, 2020 at 10:53 AM
Great imagery, the barn was the best to go back in time to really see it full of whatever it contains either animals or hay. My grandmother’s use to do the same all from scratch when cooking now it’s tv dinners. Sonia, I enjoyed reading. Stay health and safe and may your pen keep you active.
Walker Avatar
March 27, 2020 at 12:27 PM
Eve, thank you for your thoughtful comment. I remember learning how to cook from scratch when I was first married. I joined the Cookbook Club of the Month which helped so much. Bob and I are enjoying our extended cabin fever. Hugs, Sonia.
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March 27, 2020 at 3:07 AM
A great read , I was transported to that dinner table as well as standing quietly behind the bench ‘so as not to intrude, well written I really like it .
Walker Avatar
March 27, 2020 at 8:54 AM
Simon, thank you for your thoughtful words. ~ Sonia
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