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The Old Tower

Many ages the old tower had stood yet once it had been the very centre of activity to all who enter for centuries now the weather withstood Witness to many battles all hard fought many feasts and weddings held in its halls and fine chargers housed within its stalls yet now looking back it was all for nought Time had taken its toll, now just a shell ravaged by weather, could it be saved? the man stood looking and his heart craved here in this tower he would like to dwell Work started it was long and arduous slowly the tower returned to glory with the new stone brought in from the quarry at last done it now stood victorious my first attempt at enclosed rhyme hope I got it right

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Date: 1/17/2014 8:21:00 PM
Sounds good to me Shadow..really enjoyed this..luv,Deb
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Shadow Hamilton
Date: 1/18/2014 4:29:00 AM
hi Deb ty very much Shadow x smile hug
Date: 1/17/2014 7:19:00 PM
I think you did well and I love the poem. Great story Shadow. Change toil to toll, a small typo.
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Date: 1/17/2014 7:32:00 PM
ty Rick I altered it as suggested tnx Shadow x smile hug

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