The Old Rocking Chair

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I call this one liner an epitaph. Not for her but for the chair and possible for...

The voltage seeped with a screw loose so she rocked gently in the old chair and lived

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Darren White

Date: 11/7/2016 2:49:00 AM

I LOVE this new take on the challenge. LOTS!

Kai Michael Neumann
Date: 11/7/2016 5:15:00 AM

Thank you Darren. Thanks a lot. Kai

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/6/2016 7:50:00 PM

That was an interesting way to do the challenge, Kai. Rock on!!

Kai Michael Neumann
Date: 11/7/2016 2:05:00 AM

Thank you Andrea. I will and so will you. Kai

Probir Gupta

Date: 11/6/2016 4:36:00 AM

Very nice ...

Kai Michael Neumann
Date: 11/7/2016 1:59:00 AM

Thank you Probir for your kind comment and for reading my poetry. Having feedback makes my day. Kai