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The Old Man's Daughter

Heard the old man's daughter Screaming, touched once more. I grabbed my courage and got my gun. Walked out to the bare land. Knocked down the door. "You haven't met me, I am the only son". Pulled the trigger and shot him dead. Those weary eyes stared back at me. Those last words ran through my head.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 5/23/2012 5:02:00 AM
A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Lidija. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love, Carol
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Lidija Vresk
Date: 5/26/2012 6:27:00 PM
Thank you Carol i wish the same to you.
Date: 5/22/2012 8:20:00 PM
this is so sad,yet wry well written,love your work,keep up good work,love mom
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Lidija Vresk
Date: 5/22/2012 8:48:00 PM
Thanks mama(:
Date: 5/22/2012 5:05:00 PM
Very nice... Terry
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Lidija Vresk
Date: 5/22/2012 5:38:00 PM
Thankss
Date: 5/22/2012 4:18:00 PM
Very nicely done! Thank you for sharing this with us.
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Lidija Vresk
Date: 5/22/2012 5:38:00 PM
Thank you(:

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