The Old Man In the Park
THE OLD MAN IN THE PARK
Every day, same time,
He comes alone to sit there.
Quietly feeds birds.
Judy Ball
Senryu is an unrhymed Japanese form much like Haiku but with a humanities theme
instead of a nature theme. It records the essence of a moment and consists of
three lines. Count is 5,7,5
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