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The Old Man In the Park

THE OLD MAN IN THE PARK Every day, same time, He comes alone to sit there. Quietly feeds birds. Judy Ball Senryu is an unrhymed Japanese form much like Haiku but with a humanities theme instead of a nature theme. It records the essence of a moment and consists of three lines. Count is 5,7,5

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Jl Sadberry

Date: 7/10/2011 5:28:00 PM

Smile, *^_^* “I Like The Image Amid The Verse & The Story Behind Its Form & Educationals Poetic Offering *^_^* My Dear Precious & Lovely Judy Ball = Tis A Blessing for They Interested In Such This *^_^* A More Depthful Journey Into Poetry == I Also Wish to Thank Your Beauty Again *^_^* For The Kind Com In Lovely Visit My Dear &, Keep Shining Bright.” === My Love Always, Jasper *

Daver Austin

Date: 7/9/2011 10:23:00 AM

Sounds like me, Judy, except it's my backyard instead of the park. Actually, our backyard is a park, an animal refuge. This is very delicious stuff, very simple and heart felt. LOve, daver

Judy Ball
Date: 7/9/2011 10:26:00 AM

Thank you so much Daver. Glad you liked it. Wish my back yard wa like yours. God Bless, JB

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/8/2011 7:57:00 PM

I like this little picture, judy! How are you today?

Judy Ball
Date: 7/8/2011 10:52:00 PM

Thanks so much Andrea. Glad you like it. Doing o.k. here. Having a wind storm here in Alberta today. Hows it going with you? God Bless, JB

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 7/8/2011 6:52:00 PM

Nice images to create a nice visual, Judy

Judy Ball
Date: 7/8/2011 7:28:00 PM

Thank you so much my friend. Glad you liked it. God Bless, JB

Jancarl Campi

Date: 7/8/2011 3:20:00 PM

Wow! Have you perhaps seen me? This was beautiful and sweet. What else can an old man do? Jancarl C.

Judy Ball
Date: 7/8/2011 6:02:00 PM

Thank you so much Jancarl for stopping by. As the song says, There is nothing sweeter than old dogs and children and watermelon wine. God Bless My Friend, JB