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The Old Home Place

The unpainted house with a tin roof
Which leaked when it rained_well it poured
It's known tin is tin and not rustproof
But the rain on the roof played chords
Those musical chords that were adored

Rain Lulling to sleep the occupants
Until morning when aromas floated 
From the warm kitchen where parents
With warm biscuits butter coated
At this old home place love noted

Sponsor: SKAT A
Contest: Home Sweet Home
Written: January 29, 2015
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Haight Avatar
May 26, 2015 at 1:32 PM
I've been away for 10 days, still catching up with PS! Congratulations on your fine win for for your "Home Sweet Home" poem! Hugs, Sandra
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May 23, 2015 at 1:19 AM
SARA, Nice win...... LINDA
May Avatar
May 21, 2015 at 6:45 AM
Congrats on your win Sara
A  Avatar
May 20, 2015 at 7:03 PM
Sara, CONGRATULATIONS ON YOUR WIN. Enjoyed your Home Sweet Home Entry. Thank you for supporting my contest. ~~SKAT LOVE~~
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January 29, 2015 at 8:48 AM
awhhh makes me want to go back home especially this rainy season... This is sure a winning piece! All the Best!
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