The Old Greek

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The Old Greek love flowers life anger flares grease fire sunsets flowers wilt love love hate hate hypocrites I am king Perle Fine my Queen hells fire summers here

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/29/2018 4:37:00 PM

very intersting form and how you carried on your thoughts, Arthur. A bit surreal like the painting above it.

Brendan Solomon

Date: 7/27/2018 11:00:00 PM

King Bear, bring summer here! For Hell's fire is not hot enough! Top-notch, my friend

Arturo Michael

Date: 7/27/2018 8:42:00 PM

Hell fire it was...interesting write... touching with sad...

Gary Bateman

Date: 7/27/2018 1:51:00 PM

Hello Art, Very well-done here my friend!! A very hot summer is in session now in Greece. I wonder if Demetrios has seen your poem yet?? I bet he has some real-live stories to tell us. Enjoyed it!! Cheers, Gary

Lyric Man

Date: 7/27/2018 11:11:00 AM

The same heat that warms also burns.. beware the beauty of summer! Another deep work from your artistic pen, Arthur!

Pashang Salehi

Date: 7/27/2018 8:48:00 AM

Indeed summer is here with vengeance...