The Old General Store

You no longer see them around, faded into history
Every town had one, had everything under the Sun
Well for that time anyway
The Ma and Pa type, they all had a story
It was a place for general fun
Some even did business on Sunday

Polished hard wood floor, sawdust scattered all around
Big wooden barrel full of peanuts, throw the shell on the floor
No charge, cause they were free
A place where the lost could be free
There was always a welcome mat outside the front door
Out house round back if you had to pee

The butcher, bag boy and counter man were all one
The ladies would leave their shopping list, come back later
He always wore a long white apron, white shirt and tie
He never quit  until all the work was done
Free jaw breakers for the kids, throw in an extra tater
He could tell some tales, but never told a lie

Big pot bellied wood burnin stove, always a pot of coffee brewin
Where old timers could sit, whittle and spit
So they knew who was coming in the front door
Everybody knew what everybody was doing
Always spic and span, don't worry about a little grit
The Old  General Store, they don't make them like that anymore

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009



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Date: 10/20/2009 4:28:00 PM
very enjoyable read! Danny! thanks! jim
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Date: 10/20/2009 3:47:00 AM
And blow smoke out his ears and other things like that. I love it. Gone are those days mostly. There is one still in operation about 25 miles from my home. An older man and his sister keep it in operation. Keep writing. Sara
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