The October Sky

The October Sky





white and blue hyacinths
float on infinite canvas
water reflects by....

vast as human mind
uncountable mysteries
paint vivid colours....

immense blue gentian
camouflages to orange
the October sky....






Written August 25th, 2015
For contest "October Sky" by SKAT A

Awarded 8th place win
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Torres Avatar
September 2, 2015 at 11:34 AM
beautiful poem ... Congrats on your win, Dr. Sharma!! :O))
A  Avatar
September 2, 2015 at 12:06 AM
Dr Upma,, thank you for the October Sky (three headed haiku) WIN.... SKAT
Sietesantos Avatar
September 1, 2015 at 1:42 PM
This is such a beautiful piece, Dr. Sharma with amazing imagery! Congratulations on a wonderful winning write! Pandita
Callus Avatar
August 31, 2015 at 4:11 PM
Your winning imagery has not let you down, Upma! Congratulations on this lovely win. // paul
Tagore Avatar
August 31, 2015 at 10:11 AM
Wonderful Imagery... congrats on big win... Regards, Bobby
Inman Avatar
August 31, 2015 at 8:59 AM
Lovely write. Hyacinth clouds, great visual.
Tor Avatar
August 31, 2015 at 7:24 AM
Congratulations Dr. Sharma.
Kar Avatar
August 31, 2015 at 12:03 AM
Nicely chosen words Dr. Upma. Congratulations on your win.
May Avatar
August 27, 2015 at 6:13 PM
Wonderful imagery Dr Upma....best wishes
Nunez Avatar
August 27, 2015 at 12:34 PM
Lovely string of haiku, Dr. Upma. Way to go! Thanks for your visits. Hugs!
Haight Avatar
August 26, 2015 at 4:29 PM
Very lovely and soothing, Dr. Upma. All the best for the contest. Hugs, Sandra
Konos Avatar
August 25, 2015 at 10:48 AM
WIN WIN.....Love it....
Allison Avatar
August 25, 2015 at 10:02 AM
lovely imagery good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
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