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The Ocean Waltz

It begins with the first breeze of morning across the sea shore phonographic moments from early rising seagulls, arriving at the edge of dawn, soaring into the blueness above Initiating the steps to a beautiful day break the shore awakens, with a harmony of sounds, orchestrated to perfection by nature; Footsteps in the sand salted lips and hands wet feet digging deep while others are still asleep Front view seat on a cool cool spot, there she sits and waits for him the wild chestnut horse with pony box hooves, running like the wind She names him Red Beauty for the flecks of his eyes are rubies of light beneath a slow rising sun. He trots with a nay she begs can you stay as the sun burns inside all the tears she has cried It all starts with a dream at the edge of the shore, with a girl and a horse, racing right through the door All the while the wind chimes as the sea shells incline, at the end of the day she goes home, just in time.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2021




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Date: 7/10/2021 5:59:00 AM
Ocean and a cantor along the shore, what more could you want...Lovely.
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Date: 7/9/2021 1:57:00 PM
This is a special write, well done. ;0) Hugs Rick. Thanks as well for your visit.
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Date: 7/8/2021 11:38:00 PM
Fantastic write. One can only enjoy the imagery that goes with it. Hugs
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Date: 7/9/2021 4:29:00 AM
Thank you dear Victor for your presence here, The ocean and horses two of my many loves, :)
Date: 7/8/2021 7:41:00 PM
A creative, descriptive write, Vie! I really like how you did this! Blessings, Kim M
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Date: 7/9/2021 4:29:00 AM
Dear Kim, glad you enjoyed the ocean view and heart penning, have a blessing day and thank you for your visit :)
Date: 7/8/2021 6:14:00 PM
Beautiful scenes in a sad girl’s dream, wonderful poetry… B
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Date: 7/9/2021 4:28:00 AM
Yes Belle, she is sad, but the sea is her companion,
Date: 7/8/2021 4:55:00 PM
Excellent writing, dear friend Rose, well crafted with stunning images and a setting brimming with wonder and hope. With intelligence, composure, and a concept that takes the mind off the agony, this poem is a must-read.
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Date: 7/9/2021 4:28:00 AM
Horses are very intelligent and great companions, thankyou Lasaad for stopping y, have a blessed day :)
Date: 7/8/2021 4:26:00 PM
Beautiful images... a scene that reflects beauty and hope. Alive with insight, grace and a breathless vision. Love it. God bless you sweet friend. Love, Gina
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Date: 7/9/2021 4:27:00 AM
Dear Gina, how nice that the ocean gives us such freedom and God such creatures, Thank you for reading dear Gina. :)

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