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I had a wonderful time in Florida at the beach. A bit cooler and with riptides thus inspiring my poem. 

The Ocean is a Wild Beast

The ocean is a wild beast that I approach cautiously.
I submit to its undertow. It makes me laugh expansively.
I dive in, never turn my back, never quite relaxing.
It wants to rush at me, my irises on pins and needles.
A wave becomes a wall, tugs sand from my soles.
Joyful duet of wind and surf, salt and coconut oil.
I’d run from your potent power, when you’re enraged.
But I feel coddled, serene in your sweet rock’n lullaby.

pay attention, don’t be flippant.

hurricane fool’s gold
color of its eye’s smart
   furious body
with draconic scales that chew
up a crew, its sails with ship

bodies buried, some scoundrels survive.

allows for great whites
to float under the riff raff
   afloat for seconds
humorous gaff of the sea
its tenderized meat

hidden away in God’s shadow, a treasure.

sweet rock’n lull’by
for one who respects elders
   Moses’ mother prays
as zephyr-salt, warm blue skies
gently guide love back to shore
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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Hind Avatar
April 8, 2024 at 5:59 PM
What originality, Kim!! Wow!!
Rodrigues Avatar
April 8, 2024 at 6:14 PM
I so appreciate you, Paige!
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April 8, 2024 at 8:13 AM
Great ode to the ocean.. I've never been a water person... I am not a beach fan either to be honest... I like to stay away from the waves... your poem is very poetic though..
Rodrigues Avatar
April 8, 2024 at 9:38 AM
I am not one to lie down on the beach but I love to be in the ocean and watch the waves roll in. Thanks, Silent! :)
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