''The Ocean''

Abyssal, deep, the ocean flows and ebbs--drowning souls under, tide-like.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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De La Croes Avatar
April 12, 2013 at 1:26 AM
Wonderfully constructed haiku, Ngoc. The depth and movement can truly be felt! Greetings, David
Nguyen Avatar
April 12, 2013 at 2:39 AM
Thanks so much, David! You are too kind...Ngoc.
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