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''the ocean''

Abyssal, deep, the ocean flows and ebbs--drowning souls under, tide-like.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Date: 4/12/2013 1:26:00 AM
Wonderfully constructed haiku, Ngoc. The depth and movement can truly be felt! Greetings, David
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Ngoc Nguyen
Date: 4/12/2013 2:39:00 AM
Thanks so much, David! You are too kind...Ngoc.