The Ocean

Sparkling a bright blue.
As it crests in and troughs out.
The ocean does dazzle.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Dietrich Avatar
October 12, 2011 at 1:53 AM
Sweet one, Katereina!
Jones Avatar
October 11, 2011 at 8:12 PM
ok,, wow is cliche but i'm wowed! Don't 'stand much haikus, but this one wowed me. Really much dig the line "troughs out," might usurp (or praps use?) it. real nice one, much preesh. Beauty eve~N
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