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The Oasis

You are my shelter from the scorching heat. You pacify the surge of my heartbeat. You quench my drought and douse my dryness. You are my shade from the blazing brightness. When my soul is so tired and weary, you pour down your caress to quell my agony like a pair of hands extending down from heaven, that pulls me to crest unto a safe haven. March 8, 2023 Upto You Again Poetry Contest (honorable mention) Sponsored By: Brian Strand

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Date: 3/8/2023 12:28:00 PM
Congratulations on this winning work for the contest. It is a good work and I enjoyed reading it. Thank you for sharing. Sara
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R. B. Cawis
Date: 3/8/2023 12:41:00 PM
Thank you very much... I'll try to improve it...

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