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The Nurse

Your eyes glued on the heart monitor With a beating heart you count the heart beat The ailing whether Paula or Peter For him you fight ailment’s Afreet Their sinking pulse pricks your heart Their high BP torments your soul Increased urea pierces you like dart Much beyond your duty is your role Patients are left in your tender care And meticulous vigilance of night and day Your resolute dedication, your qualities rare With no one in attendance in the sickbay Scary and smelly wounds you soothe With courage infectious afflictions deal You fight with sufferings nail and tooth For care of patients, medication and meal For sick and ailing you sacrifice night’s sleep Resisting summon of your lover’s cozy arms Your heart bleeds with affection deep Your energy flows with divine charms ---

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 11/16/2011 12:43:00 AM
my beloved gramma was a dedicated nurse and her heart 'always bleeds with affection deep' till today. a beautiful dedication sir. thank you
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Date: 2/8/2009 1:38:00 PM
Havent read anything new from you lately, you dont have a case of writers block do you. Love this piece still though I already commented on it. Enjoy your day.
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Date: 1/2/2009 9:02:00 PM
hi Mohammad, thank you for your comment on my write, I am a nurse and I know all too well, what it is to deal with some who is ill, it's a very hard and demanding job, as usual your penchant for pulling the reader in with your writes, is truly amazing, I hope that this year finds you well, take care my friend, love D-nyce
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Date: 1/2/2009 10:36:00 AM
Wow!!! This is an awe inspiring poem with beautiful imagery and blooming with colors. I am deeply impressed. Thanks for your encouraging comments on my poem The Nurse. I wish you a happy and prosperous New Year. -Mohammad
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Date: 1/1/2009 5:42:00 PM
Nice tribute to nurses. I am a nurse so I really appreciate your positive view. And yes, their is the emotional component helping others through the tough times. I've shed tears many times over the years. Blessings to you for sharing this one with us. I am touched. Karen
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Date: 1/1/2009 11:43:00 AM
this poem screams emergency and stitches, Loved it as truthful and the way life treats us no matter who we are. thank you for your comments on my poetry as well.
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Date: 12/30/2008 5:41:00 PM
Wonderful tribute to an admirable profession. Any nurse would appreciate the time and effort you put into this write. Very thoughtful and exceptional. Love, Shar
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Date: 12/30/2008 4:41:00 PM
Beautiful tribute to kind, giving, compassionate souls. amazing expression, as always, love, Kristin
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Date: 12/30/2008 12:52:00 PM
A wonderful tribute to those who care for the sick with such tender compassion. Nicely fitting for those well deserving recognition! ~ Carrie
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Date: 12/30/2008 11:55:00 AM
A lovely tribute to the many Florence Nightingales of this world... '...beyond your duty is your role' is a magnificent phrase! Well done my friend!! Best wishes, Keith
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