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The notebook part 2 collaboration with white sage

*Oh babe, we now have three beautiful children that we admire  *We've fought through pain , we've fought to build our dreams , our love was never tired  *We lived like we wanted to be , two united souls, with our emotions growing higher  *But you became too weak my love when you suppose to be strong  *You've forgot who you are , who I am and every little memory that tied you to me  *Alzheimer's hurt you so bad but I never gave up , stood by your side in every second and I'll stay like this till my last breath  *Before you forget me again and have no more clue, before your memories go bare  *I tell you our story every day, so I can only have some minutes with you, 5 minutes from the memories we used to share  *But God is too kind, and allowed our desires to weave  *Our last wish we had it right babe , we started this life together and together we shall leave  *We held each other so tight , we closed our eyes and our souls started to make love in the air  *Our last breaths flew together, holding hands as the best pair-  *And United in God's heaven  *Together we came and together we left, since we started to love, our heart's got woven  *Mine beat for you and yours for me, whether we're on earth or in heaven you'll be my babe  *My one and only , my dream that came true  *I'll always give you all of me and I'll wait for you to give me all of you  *I know in heaven you'll remember who I am, and forever we will be glued The 2 parts of the notebook poem is inspired by the notebook movie .

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Date: 1/17/2016 5:49:00 PM
Special to me. Adding this gem to my fav list and thanks... Although someday, I will quite likely not even remember my own name or my poetry. Live giveth and it taketh away.. Such is life..
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Dalia Shahein
Date: 1/18/2016 6:26:00 PM
Oh dear I wish you all the best and a happy perfect life , with health , thanks for your delightful visit, hugs / / :)
Date: 1/14/2016 8:18:00 AM
Oh my, Dalia...my heart strings are being pulled here. I love this so much. Literally, my eyes are a little teary and I have a lump in the back of my throat...It's so sad when the children came to visit, she couldn't remember them. When she recognized them while they danced was amazing, and dying together as one soul and two bodies was a miracle in itself...just beautiful Dalia..Thank you for sharing this wonderful 2-part poem..-luloo
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Dalia Shahein
Date: 1/17/2016 12:05:00 PM
Your definitely right , I've sunk in my tears when I've saw that scene , it's so beautiful and painful in the same time , we appreciate your lovely comment and ur delightful visit, hugs / / :)
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white sage
Date: 1/14/2016 12:25:00 PM
thanks Laura, we are glad it's your favorite film, Dalia's done a great work bringing up a poem about the film
Date: 1/14/2016 2:50:00 AM
Dalia, hats off to you and white sage, wow!!!! amazed me! keep em coming.. i enjoy the read =`)~Olive Eloisa =`)
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Dalia Shahein
Date: 1/17/2016 12:02:00 PM
Thank you so much my dear , we're glad we made you happy , hugs / / :)
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white sage
Date: 1/14/2016 7:07:00 AM
thanks Olive, we appreciate your lovely comment
Date: 1/12/2016 5:38:00 PM
"We closed our eyes and our souls started to make love in the air...Holding hands as the best pair." that's romance that my soul can taste...gosh, the devotion is real Dalia and White Sage...J.A.B. A FAV!
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Dalia Shahein
Date: 1/17/2016 12:01:00 PM
Thank you so much dear one for your sweet sweet words , it means so much for both of us, hugs / / :)
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white sage
Date: 1/13/2016 7:16:00 AM
Thanks Justin...