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The Notebook Part 2 a Collaboration With Dalia Shahein

*Oh babe, we now have three beautiful children that we admire
*We've fought through pain , we've fought to build our dreams , our love was never tired
*We lived like we wanted to be , two united souls, with our emotions growing higher
*But you became too weak my love when you suppose to be strong
*You've forgot who you are , who I am and every little memory that tied you to me
*Alzheimer's hurt you so bad but I never gave up , stood by your side in every second and I'll stay like this
till my last breath
*Before you forget me again and have no more clue, before your memories go bare
*I tell you our story every day, so I can only have some minutes with you, 5 minutes from the memories we
used to share
*But God is too kind, and allowed our desires to weave
*Our last wish we had it right babe , we started this life together and together we shall leave
*We held each other so tight , we closed our eyes and our souls started to make love in the air
*Our last breaths flew together, holding hands as the best pair-
*And United in God's heaven
*Together we came and together we left, since we started to love, our heart's got woven
*Mine beat for you and yours for me, whether we're on earth or in heaven you'll be my babe
*My one and only , my dream that came true
*I'll always give you all of me and I'll wait for you to give me all of you
*I know in heaven you'll remember who I am, and forever we will be glued




The 2 parts of the notebook poem is inspired by the notebook movie .

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Kp Nunez Date: 1/17/2016 10:11:00 AM Full of feelings...really romantic write, WS. Another sweet collab... :-) Login to Reply White Sage Date: 1/17/2016 2:20:00 PM thanks so much Kim, we appreciate your lovely comment

Beautiful Scars Date: 1/14/2016 8:22:00 AM I just told Dalia that this is my all time favorite movie. You can ask anyone I know. This collab is the best I've EVER read here. I have a tiny tear and a lump in my throat. How sad that she couldn't remember her kids, and how sweet when she recognized him as they danced in eternal soulmate love. This is perfect white..just perfect. No joke, I may copy this and print it out to keep for myself...thank you very much for sharing this beauty white..marvelous and perfect...(tears, tears) :)-luloo Login to Reply White Sage Date: 1/14/2016 11:24:00 AM thanks Laura, we are glad our work is appreciated and well recieved....we appreciate the fact that you liked our work and that's to the fact that the film's great...well wishes dear one Beautiful Scars Date: 1/14/2016 8:23:00 AM But I would NEVER claim to have written it, I just love it and would love to read it once and awhile...Thanks for sharing..LOVE THIS!!! <3 *smiles*

Legendary Legend Date: 1/13/2016 3:48:00 PM very romantic and lovely poem.....a wonderful collaboration too. Login to Reply White Sage Date: 1/13/2016 4:33:00 PM thanks Legend

Alexis Y. Date: 1/13/2016 9:17:00 AM White Sage, you two have penned another amazing piece. It moved me to tears however the deep love expressed in write warmed my heart. You both have complimented the movie very well- Alexis 7 Login to Reply White Sage Date: 1/13/2016 9:28:00 AM thanks so much Alexis...we indeed appreciate your sweet comment

Demetrios Trifiatis Date: 1/13/2016 5:58:00 AM Having read the two parts, I have to say that if all collaborations had such a lovely outcome then we should all collaborate, dear WS and Dalia! A seven to each! Login to Reply White Sage Date: 1/13/2016 7:20:00 AM Thanks dear Demetrios...I hope that day comes when we all collaborate... I and dalia will surely be glad... We appreciate your comment

Tim Smith Date: 1/12/2016 5:29:00 PM I loved this movie. Great collaboration. Login to Reply White Sage Date: 1/13/2016 7:24:00 AM Thanks Tim...the movie's superb! And Dalia's done the thinking

Nette Onclaud Date: 1/12/2016 2:30:00 PM emotive scenes convey a collab's glorious quill... wonderful prose, WS..huggs Login to Reply White Sage Date: 1/12/2016 2:37:00 PM thanks Nette...Dalia came up with it, and I was lucky to have a collaboration with her...sorry for the comment jumping White Sage Date: 1/12/2016 2:33:00 PM thanks Victor, we really appreciate that

Dalia Shahein Date: 1/12/2016 11:04:00 AM As I said I'm happy with the beautiful result of our delightful collaboration , a true honor really dear one , hope to have more in the future , hugs / / :) dalia Login to Reply White Sage Date: 1/12/2016 2:23:00 PM I surely hope to have more collaborations too...am glad we made this